In the light I failed to see,
from the darkness I came unto thee,
When doubt fills your heart,
and hope fails its' part...
Heaven be gone tonight!
Fall of the angel,
darkness has taken it's angle.
Bring us the light,
and shed off the dark!
Bring back my angel....tonight.
as the world falls apart,
hatred breeds in our hearts.
Clouds cover skies,
and grass starts to die,
Hell hath taken us....to fight!
Fall of the angel,
darkness has taken it's angle.
Bring us the light,
and shed off the dark!
Bring back my angel....tonight.
Darkness begone,
The light has come,
darkness fades,
shine in our glades,
So bring us our heaven tonight!
Author notes
kinda a (the band)kamelot-ish theme I guess. I can hear the guys voice in my head when I read this, I think it's ok. But I wanna hear your guys/girls opinions.
A contest entry
- Music, Sweet Music by midnightsun000.
900 points, ended July 14, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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Trust me, I confused myself for a while there too lol. That's until I put the singer's voice off of Kamelot in that, and it just....fell together. I'm glad you like it though.
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Your note brought it together
I had a bit of trouble understanding it thenm in your notes it said it all and I READ IT AGAIN I liked it
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