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The Train Fell off the tracks

Impatiently waiting for things to get easier
But, they are spiring out of control
I've taken my pills for everything
They are not fucking working

I'm tapping my fingers
My eyes darting back and forth
Is something coming?
Or am I just paranoid?

I've been looking for a page
In that lifeless book of hope
That one day, someone will understand me
and put my train back on the track

Author notes

A. Kristy
B. Tranquilize
C. The Killers
D. Silently reflection turns my world to stone
Patiently correction leaves us all alone
And sometimes I'm a travel man
But tonight this engine's failing

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    "I've been looking for a page
    In that lifeless book of hope"

    Those lines are particularly strong, in my opinion. Thank you for entering & good luck!