Amidst the clouds
In a land her own
Sits a little girl
Waiting to be grown
Her mother a Queen
Her father a King
Await the one man
Who'll give her a ring
Many come; bring her gifts
In hopes of becoming a stunning prince
But in her heart she feels no love
No need to try; none will convince
Her pain is too much
And at night she cries
Her tears turn to hail
And fall from the skies
As morning dawns a new one comes
A man of heat and color; his name the Sun
He warms her heart and dries the land
Glorious sparks of love are spun
Years go by and she has her own child
A young girl of both sun and rain
At times you see her sitting in the sky
Glowing brightly like a stain
Author notes
Kind of corny, but whatever lol. Im not even sure if this is a fairytale, but I had fun making it.
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A contest entry
- Fairytales by Samcat.
1000 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I like your poem
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I like this one and don't think it's corny at all....besides,it's about having fun,.....and it shows...best wishes to you and yours. -
It was great fun to read. And isn't the whole point of fairytaes that they are slightly corny? Great write!
Good luck!
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this was a fun one to read an it made a full circle with great rhymes WTG
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This is penned as fun to share and bring a rainbow across a face to make a smile. Lovely rhyme and flow move smoothly with the reader there for a nice trip to the land of kings and queens and princes who share love and mold hearts.
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Thank you
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