Wizard in the wind is found silent and alone
at night to grasp moments of joy and spring
when they surface in wine goblets filled
with white cloud and fog from the moors.
Mysteries of life bound by dreams created
as nightmare sitting on the balcony.
Eyes of the mind are created as ruby
skies where loves elusive moments are
hidden for poets to find.
Wand waved, magic mumbled in whispers float
across the graves of brave knights templar
long since ghostly forms to float above
the cold dusty floor. Sprite would touch
their armor to raise them, and walk over skies
pink and plum on the horizon as night comes
the sun slips away.
Witches with crystal ball and loud wails
seek revenge to stay their time as they
find entrance to dragon cave. Lashes bind
wings, throats croak out fireballs as red
and yellow dragon bid the brew that enchants
their spirit.
Wizard calls loudly from the mountain top
while his opal sparkles held to his staff
with claw top. Clouds gather dark, as silver
flashs strike on the ravens tree. The witches
cloaked with feathers fall from the sky.
Stars again sparkle across the night as
the world is free of the bewitched.
A contest entry
- Fairytales by Samcat.
1000 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Thank you for sharing
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I like your poem this is nice thank you
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Outstanding
I loved the fantasy elements in this poem which is filled with inspiration. You have created a poem rich in color and imagery that is magical to read. Best of luck in the contest.
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It flowed nicely and used lots of great imagery! It's a great story and I liked the bit with the dragons wings bound as it made me think oh no but it was all alright in the end
Good Luck!
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Beautifully done! You encorporated all the wonderful elements of a great fairytale and done it with grace and great imagery! Loved reading this
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Imagery, Imagery, Imagery
Wow you have pennewd a amazing tale of knights and wizards. I love thje happy ending. Good always wins out over evil.
I am so glad your found your muse and are writing again. God gave you a gift and you must share it with us here. You have a wonderful day my friend. Take care and stay cool in this sweltering heatwave.
Blessings to you,
Sandy
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i agree with SpiritDarkMaiden
it was like music an like i was listening to it an not reading it WTG
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Wow this was awesome. It flowed so good, you forgot you were even reading. I loved it. Nice write!
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a good piece of poetry, filled with magical moments and swirling descriptive imagery. the flow is fine and well.
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