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The Cat Who

When I was a young boy...
I felt so much joy...
As I played army with my toys.

I just play all day and night long...
Then I met you and a new world became drawn...
In your eyes I saw a true love that could be won.

The flowers danced in joy of you being mine...
While the wind whispered it will get better with time...
And even my little cat purred so I know all was fine.

But ever since you left...
The flowers don't dance and the wind became wet...
While sadness hit my poor little pet.

I don't know what's in his thoughts...
But very sad he really got...
And now like me he cries a lot.

The cat who...
Is sad and blue...
Seems will never forget you.

If you are not here...
My cat won't return to me my dear...
As long as you're away he only sheds tears.

I feel you are so incredibly far...
At night I focus on a single star...
As I make myself believe there is where you are.

It seems that I have forgot...
But my little cat has not...
He can't forget the love you once brought.

The cat who...
Doesn't know what to do...
Just can't believe all this is true.

I don't understand how he knows the way I feel...
Can't even get a clue based on his appeal...
Cause I myself don't think all this is real.

Hey there honey, my life...
You enlighten my world, I wanted you as my wife...
But now that marriage will never arrive.

The cat who...
Wishes to never be let lose...
Is waiting for what path you're going to choose.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this contest!!!

    I enjoyed reading about your wonderful pet cat, although this poem is pretty sad. I really like the creativity of your muse!! Your beautiful poem is an ode of love, straight from your kind heart. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best!!! Peace, Cyn


    • Climax
      July 1, 2008
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      Thank you!

      Wish me and my kitty Felicia luck on the contest!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 9, 2008
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    Very good
    i enjoyed it
    Very well written


  • Suns Setting Angel
    June 7, 2008
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    very good

    this was a beautiful poem and i enjoyed it.


  • movedon
    June 7, 2008

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    Wow....this was amazing. I enjoyed reading it! I prarticularly (sp? ) loved the ending. But not that marriage will never arrive..wow that a strong line! Well done!!

    love
    mylee

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