Her eyes stare upon the scares on her wrists
The scares are her memories of miserable nights
She is so ashamed of herself and her life
There is pain that live with in her heart
An emptiness you can hear in her vioce
But none of the world even notices
Worthless,
Alone,
Unloved,
The sadness all around her
She can no longer hold on
There is nothing,
Nothing for her
Her shakey hand holding the razor
She presses the blade deep through her skin
And slices throught the veins
She dedicates each drop of blood all to you,
The one she loves so much,
And forever, always will
She lies her head down and looks up at the starry sky,
Remembering those long nights she spent with you,
Watching the sky together and falling asleep in your arms
The beautiful memories of love,
So sad the have to remember such times
And the promise you made her,
To never leave her,
Never forget her,
To love her forever,
To always be there,
Is broken
It has come to the moment
With her weak vioce she whispers
I love you and say good bye
Her world goes black
Motionless,
Cold,
She is dead,
Gone,
Forever
Author notes
emogirl1127
A contest entry
- NOT ALONE[invites only] by endless-lover.
550 points, ended July 1, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow it was amazing theres not much i can say it left me speeechless the emotion flowed right through my i love it keep writing
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WOW you captured me! Your piece really hit home that this is how I feel. Talented writer! I enjoyed reading this, so in depth with dark, sad emotions very good flow absolutely perrfect
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Nice, good luck in the contest.
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wow. that was simply amazing.
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loved it
I tought it was rly good. Very deep -
wow, I loved this. I loved the flow and the emotion in this poem. Awesome job.
XXCrimsonRaineXX
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I like it =]
very well written -
Liking it, especially the part about the razor... that whole paragraph, actually the whole thing, really can relate oh too well to me, which is making me like this more! Good write!
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Worthless,
Alone,
Unloved,
The sadness all around her
She can no longer hold on
There is nothing,
Nothing for her
this poem was so deep and strong and just filled wirth emotion
i loved it mucho! keep up the great work doll
just one thing please go back and put your allpoetry user name in the an!thanks and take care
xoxox
endless
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