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Tied To My Heart

Life is too short
To wake up with regrets,
So just love the people
Who treat you right
And forget about the rest.

Believing is everything.
You have to believe in yourself
And believe everything happens for a reason.

If you get a second chance,
Grab it with both hands.
Don’t let go,
Hang on to it
And if it changes your life,
Simply… let it.

No one said life would be easy,
But life was promised to be worth it.
Just as your friends are…

Some are just friends.
Some are good friends.
There are a few
Who are special friends…
Like you!

Special friends are like balloons…
Once you let them go,
You can never get them back.
They become whispers in the wind.
Whispers upon the lips.
Whispers of love
That flow in and out of life
Like the wind driven waves of a midday tide.

I’m going to tie you to my heart,
So I will never lose you!
I will never lose the love we share.

If you ever need me,
Don’t hesitate to call…
I will be there
Spring, summer, winter or fall.
Because I’ve got you tied to my heart

Author notes

I'm not really sure about this one. I'm not really happy with how it turned out. Any suggestions on how to help this be better? I know it could be much better than it is. Thanks.

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  • Legend silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    Sometimes return the favour thows up a really wonderful read This is such a time I may never have read this if not for that. A great trigute to friendship, i am not in the least suprised it picked up a silver award Excellent


    • BluRosePoet8488
      October 22, 2008
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      Thank you. I appreciate your wonderful words. Truly, I was not sure about this one. But it has turned out to be a well received one. Thanks again. Love and hugs...
      ~Donna~

  • Poet7376
    October 10, 2008

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    so true donna in every word....yes still here...may have become lost for a time...found the way back...thank-you donna for your words....brian...


    • BluRosePoet8488
      October 10, 2008
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      Brian,
      Glad you are still here. Missed you, dear friend. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! Your are most welcome, friend. Sometimes the words is all we have. Keep yourself safe and don't stay away so long. Love and hugs..
      ~Donna~


  • Firequeen
    June 19, 2008

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    Tied to my heart
    wow how beautiful is this.
    well lexies right i do love this.
    so many people come in to our lives and enter our hearts only to leave footprints behind and then there are those that decided to plant roots and stay.
    thats how this made me feel. as though someone had hunkered down into your heart for the duration.
    Thank you for this beautiful poem.


    • BluRosePoet8488
      June 19, 2008
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      Fire,
      Thank you. I wasn't real happy with it, but now, well, you have made my day. i am glad that you loved it. It was one of those off the cuff poems that turned really well. Thanks again. Love and hugs...
      ~Donna~


  • Lexie - gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    well

    I'm sure my wife will love this entry to her contest
    its very beautiful
    good luck to you


    • BluRosePoet8488
      June 7, 2008
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      Lexie,
      Thank you. I hope she does. I wasn't really happy with it, but that's a writer for you. LOL! Thanks again. Love ans hugs...
      ~Donna~

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