It's not the cuts that feel the pain
It's not the spiraling of the vein
It's not the capillaries circling 'round
It isn't the sight. It isn't the sound.
It's your response thats hurts my heart
Your cold refusal tore me apart
You know I'm in a time of need!
But there's no "sacrifice."
You let me bleed.
Author notes
It was written in point two seconds, so yeah.
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Hey, some people just don't care, even if you thought they did; some people don't now how to show they care, or what to do; some people just get annoyed at things they consider as not making any sense: just my take.
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It's good for some thing so short, conveys allot of emotions and truth. Wonderful,
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