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5:45 outta Flint

"Your blood,
My blood,
Our blood"
tears of the flesh
not for the flesh
but for our brothers
for our sisters
for our mothers and fathers

sweet crimson punch
poured out for the beasts of the earth
let them feast on it
blood doensnt make love
love makes blood

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blood quote

andy,
when you read this if you read this, i want you to remember the time we ran from the cops and you go me home when the drink got the best of me, when i stumbled by the road and my eyes wouldnt stay open

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  • Domz101
    June 11, 2008

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    Chuffin', this is sweet...

    i like it, it makes sense that love would make blood and it makes sense that runnin from pigs can lead to a bindin friendship...sweet write - Domz


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 8, 2008
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    Wicked! Though I was hoping it would be longer (I can't believe 'I' am asking for longer poetry lol)

    But really I am glad someone has entered something using this option.
    I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for entering and keep on writing,

    Nooni