Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Raven Wings

To this I am o v e r w h e l m e d with a sputtering contamination
diseases of ecstasy thrill the small of my back
Touched, by the eyelash in my e.y.e
My mind releases a silent sigh
But why it’s so joyful, how could I know why ?
Had I been so consumed I had not seen the expression, or mine as well
As half hearted as it is and as quickly as it passes
Should this only mean b e t t e r than any Warmth ever felt before
And how my inspiration desires me to spread it MORE
And forget that pitiful, worthless, unforgiving lore
More “higher ranked” had happened, but the recollection is drowned
To the p o e t i c tune of fluttering raven wings
Learning to sing to the still beating of my h.e.a.r.t
Like I’m being mesmerized by beautiful art
A glamorous new world is b e g i n n i n g to start

Author notes

Any suggestions on making it better? I wrote it quickly.

What do you percieve this to mean?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)