It feels so good to feel so right
To touch the Earth within my grasp
To feel my power increase with each breath
Blessed to be one with natures serenity
Endowed with power, knowledge and truth
But fearing my own self for the scourging power I may not control
Though, I stay humble for the gods and goddesses
Since the timeless music this magick has sent me,
Now has made me hear the tune of the borne breeze,
Across the clover covered hills and with it, I feel alive for the first time!
Author notes
Something I found very inspiring:
"The cyclical beauty of Earth captures me.
The simple perfect imperfection of a blade of grass,
or a flake of snow, or distant birdsong;
I am quite enraptured by the harmony of nature."
I am not so sure about the tile. I am planing to change it.
I am not Wiccan but I wish I was... I am into it though, very much. I read some Wiccan books and I am just awed by it. I am glad for this contest, it didn't take me long to come up with something, I've written other poems about magick (Wiccan). I find it very inspirational. Thanks so much for this...
A contest entry
- Wiccan Contest. by Abby In Chains..
300 points, ended June 16, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It sucks. Tell me something I don't know?
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I agree with you!
I think there are some parts of this piece that need refining. I LOVE the imagery and the ideas you are trying to portray! I am sure that you should change the title though. Thanks for letting me read and discuss. Blessed Be
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wow its its realllly powerful......i love it...
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Nice
Lovely, piece. Full of passion. I adored reading this throughout every line. Capturing title incorporated and the conclsion is stunning. Good job.
~Emily~ xx
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Great write. There is nothing like feeling blessed with the serenity of nature. Nice rythme and flow. You have created a wonderful piece. Keep writing. I enjoyed this immensely. ~mandie~
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wonderful write!
i feel much like this when out side catching raindrops on my face! blessed with nature's serenity
well done
Tasha
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beautiful!
i really love this one -
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tnx u sweet 1 u! ((lol))
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Wow this is awesome. Its a very interesting thing to learn about ill give you that. I like that someone who dosnt practice can admire it like this. This is awesome keep up the good work ~ Brook
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Nice
It makes me want to dance around under the moon.
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