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Love Letter One..

Baby, boy I wish I could take your breath away,
but that's never going to be enough to make you stay.
I can't promise that I will always trust,
cause every time I'm broken I just seem to rust.
I won't pretend I am just like you,
because you haven't been through what I've been through.
I won't say this thing we've got is perfect,
cause I don't need another thing you'll regret.
I'm not upfront about how I really feel,
but when I am I can say that it's truly real.
All I know and really need to know,
is right between the lines to show.
Maybe I'm different, can't take your breath away,
but give me a chance, please say you'll stay..

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Wow!
    This a very good!
    Very heartfelt indeed.
    I liked it very much.
    -Mandi


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 7, 2008

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    Excellent!

    I am already looking forward to Love Letter Two. This is excellent. Good heart touching poem! THANKS!!