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Lullaby

Scary thought, I love you,
Just cause of, what I've been through.
I thought I had no will to fight.
But loving you just feels, so right.

You caught me.
I'm not free,
Just a memory.
Say goodnight,
be my light,
all through the night.
Sing so sweet,
lullaby,
stay by my side.

Your love is, contagious hope.
And I'm hanging, by your rope.
But I know that I will be safe.
Cause you have built my faith.

You caught me.
I'm not free,
Just a memory.
Say goodnight,
be my light,
all through the night.
Sing so sweet,
Lullaby,
Stay by my side.

I can't imagine not knowing you at all,
Meeting you I was surely meant to fall.
Loving you was my only destiny.
Your never to be erased in my memory.
Cause I know where you belong, my heart,
no you won't ever be, torn apart.

You caught me.
I'm not free,
Just a memory.
Say goodnight,
be my light,
all through the night.
Sing so sweet,
Lullaby,
Stay by my side.

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  • Shya
    June 13, 2008

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    Wow! I love this song and want to hear the melody. I love the rhymes and the phrases. A very well-written piece. I like the phrases "scary thought, I love you" "Say goodnight/be my light/all through the night" "Your love is contagious hope". One of the best lyrics I've read.


  • teddybare gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    good write

    verry relatable write


    • Velvet Rose Petals
      June 7, 2008
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      Yeah its kinda what you want in a song. If you've noticed many radio songs are things that relate to people thats why they become so popular.

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