a man stumbles,
the floor catches him
at his weakest
dedications to a memory
have left him broken
and he doesn't see a way
out of this hell
she departed too soon
but yet she never left,
and as he weeps
she holds him close,
whispering anecdotes
to bring him back to life
Author notes
Louis Royo titled "gothic angel holding demon".
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A contest entry
- One Last Time *****with a pic inspiration***** by rainyday woman.
875 points, ended June 13, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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nice
the comfort of one that is gone.
good luck in contest.
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Thank you very much for entering my contest, this is a very interesting take on the picture prompt. Good luck in the contest and in all you endeavor in life.
Cheryl
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a good piece penned, a sad sighing emotion floating along here i think, dark yes, but an element of light too with the ending.
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