Paradise city could be absolute heaven
Perfect people doing everything right
Everyone's desire
Wow! over population, what a plight!
It depends on what one wants
But would it suit one another?
Would we all agree?
Or would we be at war with sister and brother
Paradise must be for all
Equality is essential
It must be global
Or life is detrimental
If you believe that all is equal
That a paradise can exist
Then you have stepped into hope
Opened your eyes, out of the mist
Yes! if we learn to love one another!
Take time to discern God's Word
Believe in God's Creation
And Jesus Christ Our Lord
A contest entry
- Paradise City by Kari.
300 points, ended June 10, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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This one reminds me of a brilliant bumper sticker
I've seen: COEXIST
That's it! You share your believe, your faith, but
only ask in return that we all may share love
and strength through faiths varied as they may be.
Blue
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aye, paradise must be for everyone, it can not only be for the elite or those who think they are the elite in life - we are all humanity.
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A beautiful example of Paradise City. It's amazing that we all seem to have our own opinion of Paradise City.
Thanks for your entry
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