are we fully aware
when our soul speaks,
or when another's is
speaking to us?...
or do we only understand
the exchange after the fact,
when the moment has passed
and we reflect upon it...
like the wind...
we feel it most in its absence
on a hot day...
we yearn for it...
but a gentle breeze constantly
blowing over us is hardly noticed,
merely taken for granted.
Share your thoughts...
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My favorite part
are we fully aware
when our soul speaks,
or when another's is
speaking to us?...
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Glad you found something to enjoy here in my pages, my friend. I appreciate the comments. Peace, Rhonda
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This is really great Rhonda!
Very similar thought has been with me before, about being in state of awareness which is prior to the appearance of 'things' and can therefore witness their coming about in their 'descent' not necessarily prior in time but in the order of reaching the level of appearance. I believe this is also much to do with realising that 'thoughts' are real actions even before any physical effect.
Whatever I think... this is beautifully put!
Sol
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Love it!
I can relate to what you've written here. I have often only noticed that soul exchange after the fact (though I still find it wonderful even then!) Great job on this well-written poem.
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Wonderful
Very touching and so well expressed. A terrific creation. Thank you for sharing.
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... and sometimes a seed is planted by the 'breeze',
still living to speak on as we hear it in the moments.
Beautiful... awareness and gratitude as 'we yearn'.
Sol
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The breeze of your soul constantly wafts across my mind and I am the richer for it.
Thank you Rhonda. I try to be aware of others touches of soul.
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Oh Swameee, thank you so much for making me remember this. Yes, the answer is sensitivity. The more you are aware of, the more you can witness the magic of the spirit.
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Yes!!!
Nothing else to say. Yes!! Oh, well done!
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I thought..
I could say something 'profound' but you have already done so with this piece, so all I can muster is ..amazing! great job poetess!
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the thought structure is quite deep and touches the universal tone of the life..well done....thanks for sharing...
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