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Sorrow

Sliding, slipping breaking the moulds,

Oh so full of pain, the voices meaning zero,

Read between the lines and find the hidden author,

Recklessly trapped and held hostage by her captor,

Owning one last will, she knows what to do,

Wipe this tear boldly from her eye and pray for a better tomorrow.

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Option 20 written as a shadow acrostic.
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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 16, 2008

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    Very true, that's all you have left to do when you are feeling utter sorrow. This is very nice and I do love acrostics as you probably know! XD