around her neck
blood stained nylons
like some
unholy communion
Author notes
Photo credit: google.com, movie still from "Turbulence" (1991)
In a list
A contest entry
- Paying It Forward From cannonsfire's Contest by In Too Deep1.
525 points, ended June 7, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this picture prompt took you into places far out in left field - unique take on the image. Congrats on your HM as well. Belated welcome to this site too - hope you are enjoying your stay.
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thank you! well, the contest host called the poets "interrogators" so i took this to a crime scene. i'm a huge fan of CSI, so this wasn't a stretch
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wow wonderful congratulations on your honor
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thank you! this was a fun contest.
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Uniquely penned depiction of the prompt. An enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp
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I enjoyed the contest, was a pleasure! Thank you for the HM.
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GREAT write about crime scene!
I enjoyed the read very much
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Thank you I had fun exploring the subject.
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Excellent ! Crime written poem wonderfully written very enjoyable poem good luck in the contest :0
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Thank you!
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I love your take on the prompt ~ a unique twist on it ~ beautiful ~ best of luck
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Thank you!
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Whoa!
Dude, that was deep. 'Nuff said.
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lol Thanks Jaime! Don't worry, Lisa's still alive
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