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Hold me tightly(24)

You held me tightly as I looked into your eyes
I prayed you would never leave me and our past behind
Strong, intense, growing fears I have
That maybe this may be the last time I look into your eyes
Strong as a storm out on the sea
washing away our memories
pulling at the threads of my heart
as the sea pulls the sea shore apart
my fears are strong but my love for you stronger
the ocean has not enough depth to conger
I will always hope for you to stay
Because I love it when you look at me that way
You are my reason, my life, my being
just like the sand has to the sea
it's avidness, ardency,and willing to be
has still no comparison to my love for thee,
You hold me close, my eyes closed tight
You couldn't hold the sea like this
it would put up a fight
The way you hold me,
so tightly, intensely, serenely, I know you love me
And would never leave me
because unlike the sea,
You see me for me.


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  • Larry-The-Faceless
    June 9, 2008

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    Great

    I thought that it was amazing,better than I'd expected...reealllyy it's great...guess what...I Love It!!


  • HeartofDiamonds
    June 8, 2008
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    Thank you. I appreciate it. =]]


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    Ah..this is indeed a deep voice to bring the passions in the touches and the love around the arms..I love its joy and thanks for sharing it...