Winter-toothed open,
through a suicide of days
she becomes Haiku.
Author notes
Word Count: If you need one for this, get help. Ahem.
In a list
A contest entry
- Suicide by Friday.
525 points, ended July 3, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think (Critical Honesty Appreciated)
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I agree with Friday; this has all those things that make poems last a life time. Really amazing. I actually didn't notice it was a haiku until the last word, which is good for me.
Good luck 
Jeanette*~
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This was so different from what I was expecting (both from you and from the contest) that I had to go back and read it again after a moment of surprise. It's simple and complex and all those lovely things that make poems last a life time. Stunning, thank you
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Excellent poetry and that last line is pure magic!!
~ Nicolette
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excellent
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This is gold.
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I was wondering if I could write a haiku to this writing...but then again...you said it all in the few concise words printed...big on meaning...I needn't bother counting...excellent work kate
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Wow! I love how metapoetic and expressive and beautiful this is, I honestly do.
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