The pale moon to dance it's glow
and ambered stars to guide the show-
In your eyes, I'll search
to find the feast of need;
and bare this soul of truth.
Quenched is the moment when tender eyes gaze in mine;
and strands of fire dance softly across the cheek.
To taste upon lips, the delicate wine,
devouring the pleasures that we seek.
Eternity awaits;
with but a simple kiss~
to die in your arms forevermore.
Author notes
One poem was skipped inthis because of it being adult. Title does NOT work with this lol
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ An amusing form of Cento~~ by Melodies.
650 points, ended June 13, 11 entries
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Comments
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You are good at this poetry thing little one
I sure enjoy reading your work. thanks for your coments. Take care, and watch who you are kissing...mac
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Thanks Mac, appreciate your comments. Don't worry, I'll keep my eye on my prize!
Storm
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this is so soft and sensual in its heartfelt emotions

I read an innuendo or two here but the fact that you left a lot to the reader's imagination really brought it all together
well done!
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well, i wasn't sure where that was going... but that is one of the most beautiful poems i have read! Well done, i love it!
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Thank you, most appreciated.
Storm
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This poem totally rocks and sparks and flows into the oceans of wonderfulness!
What a delight to read this finely stitched poem! A MASTERPIECE!


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