Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

this puzzle's been solved, and I the prize (poetic menage-tois!)

The pale moon to dance it's glow
and ambered stars to guide the show-

In your eyes, I'll search
to find the feast of need;
and bare this soul of truth.

Quenched is the moment when tender eyes gaze in mine;
and strands of fire dance softly across the cheek.
To taste upon lips, the delicate wine,
devouring the pleasures that we seek.

Eternity awaits;
with but a simple kiss~
to die in your arms forevermore.

Author notes

One poem was skipped inthis because of it being adult. Title does NOT work with this lol

A contest entry

Your comments are always appreciated, please leave one.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6
  • mcheadle
    July 20

    Edit | Reply

    You are good at this poetry thing little one

    I sure enjoy reading your work. thanks for your coments. Take care, and watch who you are kissing...mac


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      July 20
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks Mac, appreciate your comments. Don't worry, I'll keep my eye on my prize!

      Storm

  • Tattboyspet silver member
    June 23

    Edit | Reply
    this is so soft and sensual in its heartfelt emotions
    I read an innuendo or two here but the fact that you left a lot to the reader's imagination really brought it all together
    well done!

  • LoneWulf
    June 16

    Edit | Reply
    well, i wasn't sure where that was going... but that is one of the most beautiful poems i have read! Well done, i love it!

  • Melodies silver member
    June 7

    Edit | Reply
    This poem totally rocks and sparks and flows into the oceans of wonderfulness! What a delight to read this finely stitched poem! A MASTERPIECE!

1 - 6 of 6