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Just Like a Shoe

My world carried footsteps
of a well padded paw
laid bare to ice and snow

But held in the wake
of the firelight's glow
pumpkin tufts trail
deep into my heart
adoring
the bottom kicked lover
who fits just like a shoe

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  • jamiedoring
    June 10, 2008

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    This just demands to be read again and again...

    simply beautiful.

    (well deserved little shiney you got there)

    Jamie


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Oh this is just beautiful!Loved these lines 'pumpkin tufts trail
    deep into my heart
    adoring'
    Thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene