i've been walking around in this town for so long
without a destination
you are turning around
tracing circles on the floor
because you don't want to look into my eyes
we bid farewell to you, Neil
the Dead Poets Society candidates salute you
the first of our generation
to truly become a member of the club
that don't matter
this time
they will conquer the world
A contest entry
- Patchwork Poems ~~ An amusing form of Cento~~ by Melodies.
650 points, ended June 13, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Okay... seeing the contest's topic, "An amusing form". I didn't think this poem was that amusing, although the end is clearly hyperbolic.
It sounds kind of sad, but not really again, it's confusing for me.
I didn't get what you are talking about until you mentioned "Dead Poets Society", and still it's a bit hard for me to find a connection of the poem's content and the "society".
Anyway, good work.
Jo
-
-
take a look at the contest
dies ist eine zufalls-textcollage 
and it sounds stupid, that was the aim of this. apparently Mel liked it.
-
-
great patchworked poem well done and good luck in contest
-
Laughing...
This magnificent poem is as sensible as any I've read on this site and is truly inspiring and quite lovely! 
Thank you for crafting this brilliant ode. 
-
-
you know how my random poems work... if I asked you what you think this poem means, what would you say?
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
