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There once was a kitten

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There once was a kitten who hid all her loot,
down in the toe of her daddy's old boot.
Her ball with a bell, and her felt catnip mouse,
and anything else she could find round the house.

But when she climbed in she was stuck in the toe,
and how to get out, well, she just didn't know,
till daddy came home and he rescued her there,
and he soothed and he petted his kitten so fair.

So, right then, (that minute), she decided instead,
she'd hide all her cat toys beneath daddy's bed.

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  • toomysterious
    June 16, 2008

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    Oh, you got me here. This is absolutely adorable, and just a tiny bit naughty. Lovely rhyme and images. Just a totally delightful read. Definitely Gold.

  • Judith Chandler
    June 16, 2008

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    Those were some big boots. It makes me wish I had a kitten even though I love the two sedate kitties I have.

    Congrats on the gold.

  • Virginia Logsdon
    June 13, 2008
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    This is very cute! Great rythmn and great ryme.You write poetry very well.


  • Patpowers silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    Very cute work Ed! Congratulations on the gold trophy...well deserved! THANKS!


  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 8, 2008
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    haha well done and well deserved gold


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    How divinely cute. This is precious with such fabulous rhythm and flow. Congrats on your well deserved gold... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Oooooooo this is just captivating and your rhyme and flow just purrrrfect! Thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene

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