World so big
Me so small
Thousands of places
I am determand to see them all
These days of are lives
Should be filled with fun
So go out and have some
Befor the day is done
I wish we lived in a world with no sorrow
A world were there always is a tommrow
So have fun today
It is not a crime
Just remember
There is limited time
Author notes
I think this piece reflects you have one life to live so make the most of it most people always think oh there is always tommrow but some times that is not the case
A contest entry
- PIF 10/10 by AliceinPoetryLand.
800 points, ended June 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yes your words are very true and I like how you used the picture in this way. Very thought provoking. Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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