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[ World so big ]

World so big

Me so small

Thousands of places

I am determand to see them all

These days of are lives

Should be filled with fun

So go out and have some

Befor the day is done

I wish we lived in a world with no sorrow

A world were there always is a tommrow

So have fun today

It is no crime

Just remember

There is limited time

Author notes

I think this piece reflects you have one life to live so make the most of it most people always think oh there is always tommrow but some times that is not the case

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  • SmartBrick
    June 11, 2008
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    Sorry I forgot the points!Opps!

  • SmartBrick
    June 11, 2008
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    Oh my g!This poem rocked!I loved how it rhymed and how it had a natural flow to.I had 4 favorite lines this time!They wereSo have fun today

    It is no crime

    Just remember

    There is limited time

    I liked how you put it is no crime...That was GoOoOoOoOoD