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Of Life!

Rustling leaves.
Brushing my hair.
Smelling sea air.
Catching paper.
Moving fields.
Satisfying yields.
Of life!

A contest entry

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  • BluesMan gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery in such few words Thank you for entering my contest


  • thejollytinker
    July 15, 2008

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    Oh, sweet brevity. Thought I saw some content, too- not really sure...moving fields. Making us dullards think, are you? Good stuff, thank you.


  • tawk gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    Wonderful write full of vivid imagery and emotion. Good luck in the contest Theresa