dark prince
take me like fire into flames
consume me
burn through shames
master
rip me like a snowflake
razors edge
yours to take
lover
bind me to your soul
punish me
with pleasures toll
flesh demon
pierce me with steel
i am
therefore i feel
A contest entry
- Your Inner Cemetery. by EverxEnding.
400 points, ended June 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites welcome.... by Luckintheshadows.
500 points, ended September 10, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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mmmmm..loving the darkly lustful images you create here! As already mentioned, this is short, but that only adds to the impact...Superb writing! Thank you for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,
Luck. -
i love the phrasing and the sweet tone edged with lust and sadness.
very beautiful poem dear. -
Awesome dark write, short but very sweet. All the best in the contest
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