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Shades of Gray

I slowly walk,
head bent down,
tears cascading
toward the cold
cement wondering
when the pain
will cease.
Shades of gray
dominate
not allowing clarity
to take control
my long lost friends
despair and hopelessness
comfort me,
I take a deep breath
as my chest slowly
rises...
just another day
in paradise

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  • greyhaime silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    I really liked this, it is something that I can relate to, alot of my work about a year ago was mostly darker and tended to be like this. well done on it and thanks for sharing this with us here.keep it up.
    cheers
    Grey
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