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A Fat Cat

A fat orange cat
sat on a rat
but the rat wasn't fat
the orange cat was fat
so the skinny rat said
"You fat old get off,
get off of me."
That fat cat did not get off
the mat that the poor
little rat was under.
So the rat said one more time,
"Get, get off of me. I mean it cat.
Get off of me NOW!"

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  • Justin
    June 8, 2008
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    Wow... this was very random and cute. Thank you for sharing this with us. well done!


  • The Otep
    June 7, 2008
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    Such a great write! You are very creative, young man

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    Very good. But I must ask as well, did the cat get off or no? Other than that, excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    Applauds

    I love how the cat is just sitting there. Did he squish the rat? great write -mandie-

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