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I Like Rain

I like the rain
the sweet good smell
of the rain
makes me feel free
free to run
free to play

I like the rain
and its cool wet drops
making me wet
running into my eyes
running into my ears

I like the rain

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  • terranceandphilip
    October 25, 2008
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    i like the poem, but i don't like getting wet!
    Good Job!


  • xox-emma-xox
    June 8, 2008

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    rain is a wonderful topic. its cleansing, prifying and a symbol of a new begining. I like you description, especially in the second stanza, and the title seems to fit well. A pleasing write!!!
    Emma ^_^


  • The Otep
    June 7, 2008
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    Aw, this is very good! The rain is a great topic to write about! Great job


  • stylization
    June 7, 2008
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    its sweet. it's good for someone your age as well.nice write.


  • LuminousKiss
    June 7, 2008

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    Wonderful job here, buddy. I like the rain also. Very good free verse poem. Thank you for sharing. You are very mature for your age.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    I like the rain too. Gives me a feeling of inner peace and relaxation; especially when it rains very hard and there's thunder and lightning. Great poem; thanks for sharing it.
    Brian


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    June 7, 2008

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    Pretty

    I love the rain too. I like how it feels on my skin and the smell of it. great job little man. -mandie-

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