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To Laura

Like lyrics to a love song
A twisted love song
I thought we would be perfect
I almost fell apart
I am so sorry I broke your heart
Just know that I am by your side
Forever and ever on this twisted ride
They never said love was easy
They never said love was cheesy
I told you I love you
Was so glad I hugged you
I Danced with you
Slow danced with you
From that Wednesday
The second one in January
And I don't care what my friends say
From that day on I would love you forever
Love has its ups
Love has its downs
But when I see you I will never frown
See memories come
And memories pass
But memories of you will last and last
When I see you
May I shed a tear
Just know its for us
These memories are of you dear
Some are cheers
Some are frowns
Some remind me of empty towns
These I cherish
These I keep
I called you mine
You called me yours
Ive made some stupid mistakes
This by far the biggest
Just remember I love you

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  • Peteskid gold member
    June 7, 2008
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    This has a honest voice of one person pouring out feelings for another and theses are important moments where one lives it seems in a tear and a smile. It is done in end rhyme and the writer does well, is able to say and express many things and keep to form. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK