Some dreams are unforgiving, no sign of relent.
For dreams can seduce without any consent.
A dream not shared is still but a dream.
Yet a dream unearthed brings a dream into being
Author notes
All Critics welcome...
A contest entry
- PIF Sea of Dreams by Age of Rain.
2200 points, ended June 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i feel like this far too much and have strangely never even realised it... i love it when writing does that
well done
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Interesting-> unrelenting, unforgiving dreams, their unwanted seducing... they remain only a dream unless unearthed and shared... yet will patiently wait there to remind you until you see.
Marlene
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what she said and more.....privacy.....goodbye
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I really like what this is saying..what is the point in not sharing a dream...passing on the opportunity it could become reality
Nice rhyming, Short but sweet, with a great message piece here
Cindy
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