the steepness of the mind
and its ascending
tiled planes
masked
in healed scars
and dreamless nights
how could I assemble
man’s will?
the human form is not a puzzle,
it is an original song
crafted to be enhanced,
short,
ambient
what is there to solve
if
I can listen and relate
Author notes
Thanks
A contest entry
- please solve me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive Criticism
Comments
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really good poem... my favorite part was
it is an original song
crafted to be enhanced
with this you said it all.....
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You made me smile ..I like the confidence and the approach to my prompt..you are a beautiful heart..with this heart warming write...thanks for sharing it...my friend..
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