A lonely night crying out in rain
Trickling thoughts consuming my brain
Troubling desires of death and pain
A sunrise never to be seen again
Lost in the shadows of falling skies
A moment of peace dissolved by life
Drowned in the sunset with tears and knives
Knowing this time is truely good bye
A lonely breath of forgotten ways
A lifeless body saving a grave
Fighting a struggle of a dying man
Save me tomorrow for there's always pain
Please tell me what you think
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luv it
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Amazing!!!
I thought this poem was extremely amazing, it made my day
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Great poem. I can't get a whole 4 lines to rhyme like that. I always have to change the subject or it looks really weird, like...
"I float by
See the sky
Wonder why
Then I die"
I know... It's awesome...
I'm just assuming yours is better, though.
-WhiteAngelCake
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well done, mate. This speaks to me, good poem. really beautiful! Well done.
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this was a sad poem, and i lilke it. Well done keep up the good work . love queen
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what a sad poem... but it reminds me of how my life is as well... really well written... keep writing... later...
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