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A Midnight Reflection

Quell this evil in my mind,
look inside until I find,
the reasons why I'm so unkind,
I need a means to unwind,
to summon the inner strength to bind,
this unkind evil of my mind.
All this anger I feel blind,
I know I’ll find it, I just need time.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 8, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    You manage to keep a great strong flow of rhyme whilst mantaining imagery clearly.
    An excellently penned poem, very sad.

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  • Going Forever
    June 7, 2008
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    i agree with XRussian xRouletteX

    to much ryming



    but i do like it


  • sora.
    June 7, 2008
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    wooo so much rhyme o_0 haha i like this.