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A contest entry
- Quickie - Prompt Inspired 10x10 words by Cannonsfire.
300 points, ended June 7, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol dis n nice metaphor. ek sal dit onthou as ek eendag met my hond op die beach sit, en its interessant nodig het om te se
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uhm
was daai 'n kompliment of 'n insult?? Dis nou nie juis asof jy vir Toffie gaan beach toe vat nie anyway.
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ek ken net nie imand anders wat ek sal kan vashou op die beach met sunset nie, en dis nie daai drek hond nie ek praat van my emo swart hond... dixi
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Hehe
Dixi is 'n sexy beast!
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How unique this is, loved it Love, C
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eep this is so beautiful o_0
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