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Within Raptures





Feel a warmth soothing my body,
irresistible manly flavoured smell,
carried colossal odds spasms away;
in provoked shudders through out soul.

Kissing the sole to deflower nausea;
in nostalgia to float in deliciousness;
of scintillating redolence over lapping,
interwoven insert in introvert intimacy.

Within raptures of enchanting pleasures,
rest to consume an exhausting biting sadness.  














Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Picture
credit: By AliceinPoetryLand

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    A great take on the picture. You really thought outside the box with this. Lovely flow and imagery here. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

  • bobby3332321
    June 7, 2008
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    wow

    Well done great poem

  • bobby3332321
    June 7, 2008
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    wow

    Well done great poem