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You Don't Listen

I tell how I feel
Try to keep it real
But you don't listen

I sneak it in the conversation
Trying to give you a revelation
But you don't listen

I tell you I can't trust
And you say you feel lust
But you don't listen

I tell you I have doubts
I miss you baby is all your voice shouts
But you don't listen

I say I wanna know you more
You say I care about you to the core
But you don't listen

I ignore your call to clear my head
While you want me to coo you to bed
But you don't listen

I pick up to talk about something new
Yet it seems sex is all you wanna do
But you don't listen

Don't you know that's not romantic
Making my feelings kind of frantic
But you don't listen

I tell you I don't want to be a sexual tool
Yet you just seem to drool
But you don't listen

Listen to this
I love sexual pleasure
But at a certain measure
You have to know me real well
Has to be something you can tell
Cause all know I can tease
A few know I can please
But you have to know me first
Before I fill your thirst
I have to know what makes you laugh and what makes you smile
I have to know if I can trust you and if you can go the mile
I have to know if you can turn me on
Make lust so I am so far gone
I have to know you before you get a kiss
Before I take you to complete bliss
But if you don't listen my paticence will thin
And you don't want that to begin
But you just don't listen

Author notes

About a guy who is not listening when I talk to him.I know I have a hard time saying what I feel, but when I did he just talked about sex. Not attractive at all. I choose who I talk about that with and if I don't know u and you don't know I'ma tease then u out of luck.

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  • birdlove
    June 17, 2008

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    Isn't that the most frustrating feeling ever? Talking, but no one listens. I feel your frustrations; good job on portraying your emotion.


  • BlackSwan
    June 9, 2008

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    I like how you ended each verse with "But you don't listen"

    kinda borderline erotic but I'll accept it cause I liked the rhyming and all ^-^

    -GL in contest


  • Expression
    June 7, 2008

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    ok i see u sista...dis one str8 on point..im feelin dis...and ye a think i kno who u talkin bout...call me wen u get a chance