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For granted

Only a soft hum enters
Imagine going through life;
without the sweet sound of a friend, a whisper, or a lover's moan
To not feel the emotion of laughter in another's voice

The pain it must be;
that you can't understand words
and they literally can't reprehend you

I know you here this alot
But, people take for granted of what they have

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  • Simply Simple
    June 8, 2008

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    Definately self-explainitory. Author's name in author's notes though. Thanks.

    A loverly write. This is quite good and says a lot. Thanks for entering.

  • OurxBeginning
    June 7, 2008

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    Indeed, I couldn't agree more with you. People do take a lot for granted.. and it's sad. I really liked this, though it was short. Thanks for entering and good luck.