Days come and days pass
Same people at the club
Sitting in sunday mass
End Of Days
Author notes
Here it is 17 powerful words I hope it makes you think like it makes me
A contest entry
- Dry Eyes by Lavender Butterfly.
410 points, ended June 7, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is so thought provoking with great detail and imagery.... x
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Oooooo this was deeply powerfull and thought provoking. Thinking a trophy on this for sure!




