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There's a Visene for that!!

Never again!
Not one tear, not a drop.
Deaths here, still I have no tears.

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prompt: dry eyes

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  • demon bunny90
    June 19, 2008
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    me loves

    oh my god, that is so awsome...but you totally stole my idea.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 7, 2008
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    An expressive and powerful little write.... x


  • Justin
    June 7, 2008

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    Wow... I liked this a lot. The last line was powerful and it showed just how tragic it was that the person couldn't cry. well done!