~Angel-Anne~

May I
whisper sweet words
of my love for you Dear?
And may I kiss those lucious lips
while I caress your strong muscled body
taking you to pleasures heaven
as two hearts beat as one?
please tell me Dear
May I ?

Kissing
and caressing
taking it nice and slow
whispering sweet words in your ear
gently lifting your face,to kiss your mouth
Oh how I'm aching to taste you
kissing more than just lips
want all of you
kissing

Hello Dear Poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued. I appreciate your thoughts dearly.
I hope you enjoyed the read.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Your friend in poetry.

~Angel-Anne~

Author notes

I have written a 'double' RICTAMETER.
I have used the syllable counter from the link below.

http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp

A single rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and last lines are the same word with the syllable count as follows:

line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9
line 2 - 4 syllables
line 3 - 6 syllables
line 4 - 8 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables
line 6 - 8 syllables
line 7 - 6 syllables
line 8 - 4 syllables
line 9 - 2 syllables - same as line 1

A contest entry

Names by xxRainbowDawnxx. 300 points, ended June 20, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Criticism is very much welcomed, as I am here to learn.

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xxRainbowDawnxx
June 20, 2008
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Beautifully wrote.
Tender, delicate and soft.
ckwriter69
June 7, 2008

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Very nice rictameters, I have just started doing a few of these and they are fun. Very sensual and full of love as all your writes are. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
lots of love,
Charley
- Angels Whispers
  June 9, 2008
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  ckwriter69
  
  Hi Babe,thanks for the read and applause.your thoughts on my writes are always appreciated and treasured.I am also just learning to write in the form of rictametres, and yes..they are fun to write.You have written some wonderful poetry in different forms, and always a real pleasure to read.
  Lots of love and many beautiful blessings to you.
  ~Angel~
Dreamana
June 7, 2008

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So far I have not had the confidence to try and write and rictameter style poem... This one flows so well, and makes me feel the need for a codl shower too!
- Angels Whispers
  June 9, 2008
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  Dreamana
  
  Hi there dear friend,beautiful blessings to you.
  Thanks so much for your comment and applause on my write.Your thoughts are always appreciated and cherished, and I'm pleased that you liked the read.
  Take care dear one.
  ~Angel~