Eyes twinkle
beyond our imagination
The brightest ones
long since burned out...
...but the dream goes on
Author notes
Prompt: Dry Eyes
Pic Credit:
http://www.nasa.gov/centers/goddard/images/content/177768main_O_Star_Binary_med.jpg
A contest entry
- Dry Eyes by Lavender Butterfly.
410 points, ended June 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great picture choice...it's very pretty and I can't believe it's from the NASA, LoL.
"beyond our imagination"
Wow, what could be beyond people's imagination? Everybody knows humans are crazy!! Really makes you wonder..
"The brightest ones
long since burned out..."
Now I'm thinking of stars (I'm sure that was your intention, so nice).
"but the dream goes on"
Intriguing and serene in an ambitious way (apparently that's possible!!)
Good luck! =]
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Always love your comments. Taking the time for an indepth analysis of my work. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments on both these recent short writes!
-Dan
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Beautifully done hun!! A very gentle touch to this with a feeling of hope at the end!
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Hey where'd you come from!!
didn't even know you were on. Thanks for taking the time to give me a read sis!
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hehe.. you know I'm always hiding
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This is just lovely and such a serene take on the prompt... x
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