Mysterious igniting my heart,
So beautiful the way it brightens up my darkest days...
The glow turns my amber eyes red,
heart stopping beauty...unimaginable passion,
Flicking back and forth like a cats tail,
I could stare into the heart of the flame for hours,
basking in its comfort, its joy and warmth,
clinging to every movement that even the slightest breeze creates for it,
how can it be so beautiful and yet so powerful,
so spellbinding and yet so destructive?
A contest entry
- The Elements: Round 1 by Ink4Blood.
900 points, ended June 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like fire i also love this poem about fire lol you have the gift hehe sounds like a movie the gift but yeah this is really descriptive i would have just wrote "i like fire" lol cause thats how i roll lol
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i like fire
i luv this poem this is my favorite one yr well good at poetry how u get so good -
i luv i luv it
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i luv yr poem
yr poem was great luv it sooo much -
i luv yr poem
omg your poem is so goood i wish i had da brains to think of sumthing like dat my poems are crap oh well i have only just started poetry -
Mysterious igniting my heart,
So beautiful the way it brightens up my darkest days...
The glow turns my amber eyes red,
how can it be so beautiful and yet so powerful,
so spellbinding and yet so destructive?
a great poem good luck in the contest
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okay i guess...
was in a hurry
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