Happiness yawns
just left of my toes.
Tiger striped softness
wrapped into itself,
stealing precious body heat.
My heart starts to purr
and my mind takes a leave.
Night is swallowed in tranquility
and happiness yawns...
just left of my toes.
Author notes
Prompt: Happiness yawns (10 lines)
I used my cat as inspiration on this one. I had more difficulty than I expected but finally got to a point where I needed to let it go. Hopefully it works for you. And, if not, I'll put some more work into.
A contest entry
- Pif PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
750 points, ended June 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this poem is really cute, i love how you have took something simple and a deep prompt and combined them together, congrats on you HM, Thank you for the comment on my poem, and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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Cute!! Animals really have the life don't they! lol
This was really sweet Mark!
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