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[ At times we feel so weak ]

At times we feel so weak

We feel life is so bleak

We find ourselves lost in the winter

A missing piece we seek



At times we are at our best

We throw our heads to the west

We feel the wind kiss our face

We feel God's glowing grace

We know then we are not a Puzzle

but a Piece in its place

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  • maggy1126
    June 17, 2008
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    OMG.... I really enjoyed your poem.. the ending was so deep. it really made me think...


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    Humm..you are somehow very true and very appealing at the same time..I agree with you ...thanks for sharing it...my friend..