I'm an adept creator of surreals in peace,
disciple of time in restricted conscience,
escape from obsessive attacks, live in myself;
to cross deliberately in attacks of convictions.
Have an age of every hour, adamantly fought;
in an experience to encounter empty terrors,
dispense abandonment, raise borders of poison,
at disasters, living seriously crazy day by day.
Protagonist of transporting trapeze are falling,
lost balances in absence of substitute environment,
don't walk in curfews of unproductive anti-values,
but rotate my existence in strong ego independence.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 6. Curfews for the conscience
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Prompt : I am only one; but still I am one. I cannot do everything, but still I can do something. I will not refuse to do the something I can do.
- Helen Keller
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I'm sorry but I don't connect to anything. It bugs me to see "surreals" - the word surreal is an adjective, adding an s doesn't make it a noun so that fragment distracts me. Also, in stanza 3, you use "are" in line 1 but protagonist is singular.
Not really to my taste, but I appreciate your effort and applaud your vocabulary. Thanks. -
Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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