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Rescues of the heart

Unprotected sores slowly weep
The excretion of your betrayal
The blood of my lost love
You bandage these with your love
With your all seeing eyes
You see who I truly am
Not a fighter

You hold me tightly
Within your arms
I heal

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prompt Rescues of the heart
i love you grandpa

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  • penman gold member
    June 8, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.