My heart began to break,
When you left me.
My life started to end,
when you said goodbye.
I took that razor to my wrist,
and drug it across.
I watched as my blood,
began to drip from the cut.
Tears fell from my eyes,
when you left me.
I knew it was the end,
not only for us,
but for me.
This would be,
my final moments.
My last few seconds.
You would live on,
but I was already dead,
when you said goodbye.
Now I will slit my throat,
and take my life.
I loved you,
You were my everything.
But I was nothing to you,
I was dead to you.
Now I'm dead to everyone.
I hope you feel better,
knowing I loved you so much,
I took my own life.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i really like your poem it is sad but i kinda can relate to it i really like the part of "..Tears fell from eyes, when you left me. I knew it was the end, not only for us, but for me." yeah but it is really heartful.
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WOW! that is really deep although i feel as though there is more to it somehow
"I took that razor to my wrist,
and drug it across.
I watched as my blood,
began to drip from the cut."
i know how that feels i have cut myself just recently -
Very passionate.
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How I know that feeling. This was well written with lots of raw emotion. It captured the reader in the first line of it. It held me through out the entire poem. I hope things are better for you now and that you have put this behind you. Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep penning you do well.
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